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After his father goes to jail a naive television executive deliberately produces the worst possible shows in order to drop the ratings and prevent his father’s network from being taken over, but the shows he produces become a huge success and he is made to continue making them.
Thanks for the ideas guys. How about this as an update: When an evil corporation threatens to buy out his father's television network, an executive deliberately produces the worst shows to drop the ratings and prevent the take over. But the new shows rate through the roof.
Thanks for the ideas guys.
How about this as an update:
When an evil corporation threatens to buy out his father’s television network, an executive deliberately produces the worst shows to drop the ratings and prevent the take over. But the new shows rate through the roof.
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Hi Daffa: As a rule of thumb there is no need to mention the Main Character's name (unless it is vital like Jesus for example or a character's name in a biopic) other wise best to structure a logline around a single plot from the point of view of the main character. What is the MC inciting incident,Read more
Hi Daffa:
As a rule of thumb there is no need to mention the Main Character’s name (unless it is vital like Jesus for example or a character’s name in a biopic) other wise best to structure a logline around a single plot from the point of view of the main character.
What is the MC inciting incident, character flaw and goal?
These should be answered in the logline normally in that order and with approximately 25-30 words in total.
bellow is a helpful link with more details on logline construction:
https://loglines.org/howto/
Hope this helps.
See lessPossessed by an angel, a reclusive student is forced to track down the host of an escaped demon and exorcise it before he becomes its next victim.
It sounds like the MC is the angel and the logline should be told form his or her point of view. The angel can still take control of the students body but the story is the angel's not the student's. What is the big danger posed by the demon outside of the that to the person he or she is possessing?Read more
It sounds like the MC is the angel and the logline should be told form his or her point of view. The angel can still take control of the students body but the story is the angel’s not the student’s.
What is the big danger posed by the demon outside of the that to the person he or she is possessing? Is there a greater good the angel is fighting for than one human? Could the demon be trying to bring about the Apocalypse for example?
I think the stakes need raising significantly and an inciting incident needs to be specified.
Hope this helps.
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