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After a werewolf slaughters the family of a pregnant newlywed, she learns a Grimm ancestral secret and becomes a cold-hearted huntress while investigating who stalks her.
This premise has much potential. Best to remove "...while investigating who stalks her." because this is a secondary goal which subsequently dilutes the primary goal of hunting the Werewolf. Hope this helps.
This premise has much potential.
Best to remove “…while investigating who stalks her.” because this is a secondary goal which subsequently dilutes the primary goal of hunting the Werewolf.
Hope this helps.
See lessTrish Humphries a self-absorbed news reporter who just moved to New York finally gets her own talk show. She thinks it’s in a big network, but it’s really just public access. Now she has to learn how to work with her new team and balance her open relationship with her three boyfriends while pursuing her dream to be famous.
Agreed with most of the above but must point out that the irony of her landing a gig on a public access network instead of a big commercial one isn't needed in the logline because it doesn't relate to the plot. I would embellish her character flaw by adding arrogant then the humour will be hinted atRead more
Agreed with most of the above but must point out that the irony of her landing a gig on a public access network instead of a big commercial one isn’t needed in the logline because it doesn’t relate to the plot.
I would embellish her character flaw by adding arrogant then the humour will be hinted at if you describe that much to her disappointment the gig is on a public access network.
Most importantly cut the love interests sub plots and specify her goal something that ties into the inciting incident of her discovery that the gig is in a public access network. Perhaps she tries to raise the ratings and compete with the local commercial network or something to that effect that she must fight to achieve.
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See lessFour friends, who are all about to go through some life changing experiences. The Brotherhood is about to become The Fatherhood. And it isn’t going to be easy
This describes a situation not a plot. The next draft of the logline neds to answer the following: Who needs to achieve what and why? Hope this helps.
This describes a situation not a plot.
The next draft of the logline neds to answer the following:
Who needs to achieve what and why?
Hope this helps.
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