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?Hands of Stone? Boxer turned attorney, Maxx Cohen, takes off the gloves fighting an uphill battle with ruthless federal prosecutors while bobbing and weaving his way through representing the New York Mafia.
No need for the title of the script or the MC's name in the logline. This seams like a situation not a plot. What does the MC specifically want and why now what was the event that made him need/want his goal? What motivates him? These elements need to be evident in the logline. Hope this helps.
No need for the title of the script or the MC’s name in the logline.
This seams like a situation not a plot.
What does the MC specifically want and why now what was the event that made him need/want his goal? What motivates him?
These elements need to be evident in the logline.
Hope this helps.
See lessA worker gets an email that he won a million dollars but his boss wants to steal it from him so they agree to battle each other in a nerf gun war.
This may be a scene but not a whole plot. As a short it lacks plausibility most people now days would not believe from a mere email that they have actually won a million dollars and if they do they loose any credibility in the audiences mind. Secondly as stated above if the MC gets undeniable confirRead more
This may be a scene but not a whole plot.
As a short it lacks plausibility most people now days would not believe from a mere email that they have actually won a million dollars and if they do they loose any credibility in the audiences mind.
Secondly as stated above if the MC gets undeniable confirmation that he has won then why not quit his job and tell the boss to stick it then keep his money.
Hope this helps.
See less"A CIA agent pulled out of retirement is tasked with [Stakes: capturing a terrorist in Palestine] which is his [antag: estranged daughter]. Will he follow his heart or serve his country?"
I'm confused, what is the logline proposed here about an attack planned in an Israeli-Palestinian summit or a beauty pageant? Also I would be wary of writing about a sensitive subject held close to many people's hearts with out knowing the facts and history intimately. Two big questions your posts aRead more
I’m confused, what is the logline proposed here about an attack planned in an Israeli-Palestinian summit or a beauty pageant?
Also I would be wary of writing about a sensitive subject held close to many people’s hearts with out knowing the facts and history intimately.
Two big questions your posts above raise:
– you wrote “…capturing a terrorist in Palestine…” there are Palestinian territories and there is Israel Palestine doesn’t exist. Political opinions aside and in a practical sense, where is the story located in Israel or the Palestinian territories?
This distinction is incredibly important if you are writing on this subject matter and held in very high regard by many people whom will need to read the script before the film gets made.
– you wrote “…As long as the world needs oil reserves to fuel it?s energy cost. They?ll never not occupy the Middle East. This is a war of money not politics…”
I am not sure this statement rings true to most terrorists or IDF personal. There is no oil being pumped out of the ground for international markets in either Israel or Palestinian territories. At most there is very little and to the degree that would hardly impact any economy much less be able to supply any other countries in the world.
Why would terrorists in Palestinian territories care about oil and money if they are driven by their own ideology?
Hope this helps.
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