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A seemingly well adjusted 29 year old film maker is forced to face his own insecurities when tasked with producing a movie on teenage female self esteem
Hi Matt. Was this double post a mistake? Or intentional?
Hi Matt.
Was this double post a mistake? Or intentional?
See lessWhen a shy courier, in a bad marriage, is allured by the friendly wife of a drug criminal, he pursues her help to overcome his social anxiety, despite exposure to his wife's brother by police phone taps.
Better to define an inciting incident to provide a clear trajectory for the story. After a drug dealer's wife seduces a shy courier he must do something... Then think of a goal that is a direct result of this inciting incident because wanting to get over his social anxiety may be an inner goal for hRead more
Better to define an inciting incident to provide a clear trajectory for the story.
After a drug dealer’s wife seduces a shy courier he must do something…
Then think of a goal that is a direct result of this inciting incident because wanting to get over his social anxiety may be an inner goal for him but not an external one. What is it he wants/needs to achieve in the A plot?
Secondly how does he know her husband is a drug dealer? This seams like a bit of information that would be very hard to come by.
Hope this helps.
See lessin the near future a Government sponsored torturer is using his position to steal information and money from death row inmates. He is unaware that his next prisoner is an undercover agent sent to trap him.
Craig the details in your explanation are as confusing as the original logline and with the knowledge of these details all previous comments still apply.
Craig the details in your explanation are as confusing as the original logline and with the knowledge of these details all previous comments still apply.
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