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A profiling expert searchers for the mastermind behind her families tragic past, and finds herself in the twisted world of a group of disturbed psychologists who have been awaiting her arrival.
This logline does't describe a plot as there is no goal and inciting incident. What does the profiling expert want? Why does she want to get it now? What is her flaw? I think you meant possessive as appose to plural family's instead of "?families?" if so her family's tragic past should be describedRead more
This logline does’t describe a plot as there is no goal and inciting incident.
What does the profiling expert want?
Why does she want to get it now?
What is her flaw?
I think you meant possessive as appose to plural family’s instead of “?families?” if so her family’s tragic past should be described clearly. If they were killed or killed each other then best to mention this as it is a strong motivator.
Hope this helps.
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This logline lacks clarity and doesn't specify a plot. Why are there two main characters? Is there a need for dual a protagonist plot? What is their goal? What are their character flaws? Hope this helps.
This logline lacks clarity and doesn’t specify a plot.
Why are there two main characters? Is there a need for dual a protagonist plot?
What is their goal? What are their character flaws?
Hope this helps.
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Everything said above. Also the goal is hinted at but not specified is his goal to catch the killer? If so this needs to be specified in the logline. Further to that the inciting incident needs to correlate to the goal in a logical line of connection. By that I mean because of the inciting incidentRead more
Everything said above.
Also the goal is hinted at but not specified is his goal to catch the killer? If so this needs to be specified in the logline.
Further to that the inciting incident needs to correlate to the goal in a logical line of connection. By that I mean because of the inciting incident the MC must achieve the goal therefore as suggested above the death of his family could be the inciting incident in this case.
Hope this helps.
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