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  1. Posted: March 4, 2015In: Public

    When a vindictive cyber-terrorist steals nuclear activation codes, a distrusting special agent must use an experimental machine to enter his mind and retrieve them before he instigates a global conflict.

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    Added an answer on March 5, 2015 at 10:37 am

    Exactly. The idea is that an audience member will empathise with the MC for one reason or another. As this empathy is established the audience member will see a bit of him or her self in the MC and follow them on the journey in a way that replicates themselves going on the same journey. This makes tRead more

    Exactly.

    The idea is that an audience member will empathise with the MC for one reason or another. As this empathy is established the audience member will see a bit of him or her self in the MC and follow them on the journey in a way that replicates themselves going on the same journey. This makes the viewing experience a personal one for the audience and masks the strategised plot structured around the inner journey.

    The unity of action of the MC drives the audience to follow them as they fight against or react to the obstacles in the story of the world.

    The unity of action and empathy are the substance of interest for the audience.

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  2. Posted: March 4, 2015In: Public

    When experimental mind control technology is stolen, a cold and ruthless assassin is hired to retrieve it and kill the thief, but the more he discovers, the more he realizes he stole it.

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    Added an answer on March 5, 2015 at 10:21 am

    In either case make sure the inciting incident differs from the norm for him. This would be the norm established in act one to which both MC and audience by into. The question is what would make for a more interesting (marketable/sellable) story? An unclear norm shrouded in mystery with a potentialRead more

    In either case make sure the inciting incident differs from the norm for him. This would be the norm established in act one to which both MC and audience by into.

    The question is what would make for a more interesting (marketable/sellable) story?
    An unclear norm shrouded in mystery with a potential twist or a seemingly clearly defined norm with a sharp change of state. Would Ridley Scott had been able to make Blade Runner without the precedent of Alien I can’t say but in todays over saturated market an uncredited writer would have a better chance of selling the later.

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  3. Posted: March 4, 2015In: Public

    When experimental mind control technology is stolen, a cold and ruthless assassin is hired to retrieve it and kill the thief, but the more he discovers, the more he realizes he stole it.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on March 5, 2015 at 10:21 am

    In either case make sure the inciting incident differs from the norm for him. This would be the norm established in act one to which both MC and audience by into. The question is what would make for a more interesting (marketable/sellable) story? An unclear norm shrouded in mystery with a potentialRead more

    In either case make sure the inciting incident differs from the norm for him. This would be the norm established in act one to which both MC and audience by into.

    The question is what would make for a more interesting (marketable/sellable) story?
    An unclear norm shrouded in mystery with a potential twist or a seemingly clearly defined norm with a sharp change of state. Would Ridley Scott had been able to make Blade Runner without the precedent of Alien I can’t say but in todays over saturated market an uncredited writer would have a better chance of selling the later.

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