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  1. Posted: March 5, 2015In: Public

    When a reckless special agent, who’s enhanced with mind control technology, is hacked and made to kill his own team, he must expose his would-be puppeteers to prove his innocence, but the closer he gets, the more he finds himself asking: Is he a puppet, and, if so, who’s pulling the strings?

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    Added an answer on March 6, 2015 at 2:32 pm

    Perhaps make it clear to him that what happened to him was not an isolated incident and he must stop the "real" puppeteers from carrying out further mind control attacks on other operatives. By this I mean give him a clear goal that we could conceivably envisage him completing and in the same tokenRead more

    Perhaps make it clear to him that what happened to him was not an isolated incident and he must stop the “real” puppeteers from carrying out further mind control attacks on other operatives. By this I mean give him a clear goal that we could conceivably envisage him completing and in the same token allow him to do something for the greater good.

    Hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: March 2, 2015In: Public

    Based on true events. ?When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in Nazi death camp Treblinka, they must convince the cruel camp commandant to spare their lives.”

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    Added an answer on March 6, 2015 at 2:27 pm

    I beg to differ with the comments above and would strongly recommend finding further dramatic plot points to bulk up act 2 preferably cinematic ones that lend themselves to be dramatised visually. Also Rutger regardless your cultural heritage this is your story and you have the right to do with it aRead more

    I beg to differ with the comments above and would strongly recommend finding further dramatic plot points to bulk up act 2 preferably cinematic ones that lend themselves to be dramatised visually.

    Also Rutger regardless your cultural heritage this is your story and you have the right to do with it as you please for purposes of the film. If I were you I wouldn’t concern myself at this stage with historical accuracy rather structuring a compelling plot that delivers the same meaning as the original event.

    However this is now a matter of taste and on taste there can be no debate.

    All the best with this concept.

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  3. Posted: March 2, 2015In: Public

    Based on true events. ?When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in Nazi death camp Treblinka, they must convince the cruel camp commandant to spare their lives.”

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on March 6, 2015 at 2:27 pm

    I beg to differ with the comments above and would strongly recommend finding further dramatic plot points to bulk up act 2 preferably cinematic ones that lend themselves to be dramatised visually. Also Rutger regardless your cultural heritage this is your story and you have the right to do with it aRead more

    I beg to differ with the comments above and would strongly recommend finding further dramatic plot points to bulk up act 2 preferably cinematic ones that lend themselves to be dramatised visually.

    Also Rutger regardless your cultural heritage this is your story and you have the right to do with it as you please for purposes of the film. If I were you I wouldn’t concern myself at this stage with historical accuracy rather structuring a compelling plot that delivers the same meaning as the original event.

    However this is now a matter of taste and on taste there can be no debate.

    All the best with this concept.

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