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After a series of strange events, a young woman concludes that she is a witch with magical powers. Against her will , her family pushes her to undergo psychiatric treatment.
Agreed with many of the comments above I would add the importance of the relationship between character trajectory and genre. By this I mean consider her character flaw and how she overcomes it then consider the genre, does her inner journey relate to the genre? This concept could be a drama or a faRead more
Agreed with many of the comments above I would add the importance of the relationship between character trajectory and genre. By this I mean consider her character flaw and how she overcomes it then consider the genre, does her inner journey relate to the genre?
This concept could be a drama or a fantasy magic story or a gothic thriller with each one the character flaw could be used to convey and enhance this. Point is I couldn’t pick the genre and I think to help with this you should use a good clear character flaw description.
There have been many teenage movies about teens discovering “special” or “magical” powers. So many in fact that to write one today the concept has to be unique and in this case a unique concept means a unique inner journey.
Hope this helps.
See lessWhen the troubled son of a wealthy business CEO falls into heavy heroin abuse, he is taken care of J05HU4, an A.I. who is to help his son come off his heroin addiction only to relate to him during his withdrawals that evolves J05HU4 in the process.
The first part of the logline sounds like the start of an interesting redemption story but when the AI is mentioned the sudden change of genre confuses the premise. The MC is the son his goal is to kick the habit but what is the inciting incident? What twist could you introduce in the mid act 2 turnRead more
The first part of the logline sounds like the start of an interesting redemption story but when the AI is mentioned the sudden change of genre confuses the premise.
The MC is the son his goal is to kick the habit but what is the inciting incident? What twist could you introduce in the mid act 2 turning point or act 3?
I ask because just quitting drugs as a goal has been done and the story could benefit from an unexpected change, another layer or sub plot.
Hope this helps.
See lessWhen a White House security guard thinks he prevented a Boeing 747 from crashing in to the White House, by killing a supposed hijacker (in front of him) that whispers Allahoe akbar, he is accused of first degree murder and sentences to death. Franz Kafka’s "Der Prozess" meets ?
If you do find a way around the plot holes DPG stated and create a credible way for the agent to get a gun on the plane, the structure and wording of the logline could use some tweaking. The MC's motivations for suspecting the individual could be cut, I think best to jump strait to the inciting inciRead more
If you do find a way around the plot holes DPG stated and create a credible way for the agent to get a gun on the plane, the structure and wording of the logline could use some tweaking.
The MC’s motivations for suspecting the individual could be cut, I think best to jump strait to the inciting incident which seams to be the death sentence. As a result of this he has to work very hard to save his life.
Hope this helps.
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