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Based on true events. ?When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in Nazi death camp Treblinka, they must convince the cruel camp commandant to spare their lives.”
Latest draft of the logline reads the best however their is s fundamental problem in concept here. "...they must convince the camp commandant..." is a relatively short lived action. For a short film this could work but I can't see how convincing someone could provide enough cinematic material for aRead more
Latest draft of the logline reads the best however their is s fundamental problem in concept here.
“…they must convince the camp commandant…” is a relatively short lived action. For a short film this could work but I can’t see how convincing someone could provide enough cinematic material for a full length film.
How about you take some liberties with the concept and have them change tactics convince then try to to escape. This could easily take up enough time to tell over a full length.
This may differ from the original document but this is not a documentary and in my mind reality shouldn’t get in the way of a good story.
See lessBased on true events. ?When a decorated Luftwaffe officer and his family on holiday accidently end up in Nazi death camp Treblinka, they must convince the cruel camp commandant to spare their lives.”
Latest draft of the logline reads the best however their is s fundamental problem in concept here. "...they must convince the camp commandant..." is a relatively short lived action. For a short film this could work but I can't see how convincing someone could provide enough cinematic material for aRead more
Latest draft of the logline reads the best however their is s fundamental problem in concept here.
“…they must convince the camp commandant…” is a relatively short lived action. For a short film this could work but I can’t see how convincing someone could provide enough cinematic material for a full length film.
How about you take some liberties with the concept and have them change tactics convince then try to to escape. This could easily take up enough time to tell over a full length.
This may differ from the original document but this is not a documentary and in my mind reality shouldn’t get in the way of a good story.
See lessWhen a vindictive cyber-terrorist steals nuclear activation codes, a distrusting special agent must use an experimental machine to enter his mind and retrieve them before he instigates a global conflict.
Exactly. The idea is that an audience member will empathise with the MC for one reason or another. As this empathy is established the audience member will see a bit of him or her self in the MC and follow them on the journey in a way that replicates themselves going on the same journey. This makes tRead more
Exactly.
The idea is that an audience member will empathise with the MC for one reason or another. As this empathy is established the audience member will see a bit of him or her self in the MC and follow them on the journey in a way that replicates themselves going on the same journey. This makes the viewing experience a personal one for the audience and masks the strategised plot structured around the inner journey.
The unity of action of the MC drives the audience to follow them as they fight against or react to the obstacles in the story of the world.
The unity of action and empathy are the substance of interest for the audience.
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