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  1. Posted: February 20, 2015In: Public

    While a boy is at camp he discovers the owner of the camp was a notorious bank robber and the boy wants to expose him but he doesn't want to get caught by the stingy counselors.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on February 21, 2015 at 10:32 am

    Sounds like a comedy but am not sure, what genre is this? I do wonder though why the boy cares so much about the owner being a criminal. What is motivating him to turn him in? Is there a personal element in this for the boy? Hope this helps.

    Sounds like a comedy but am not sure, what genre is this?

    I do wonder though why the boy cares so much about the owner being a criminal. What is motivating him to turn him in? Is there a personal element in this for the boy?

    Hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: February 20, 2015In: Public

    While a boy is at camp he discovers the owner of the camp was a notorious bank robber and the boy wants to expose him but he doesn't want to get caught by the stingy counselors.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on February 21, 2015 at 10:32 am

    Sounds like a comedy but am not sure, what genre is this? I do wonder though why the boy cares so much about the owner being a criminal. What is motivating him to turn him in? Is there a personal element in this for the boy? Hope this helps.

    Sounds like a comedy but am not sure, what genre is this?

    I do wonder though why the boy cares so much about the owner being a criminal. What is motivating him to turn him in? Is there a personal element in this for the boy?

    Hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: February 21, 2015In: Public

    A man?s drunken persona comes to life revealing a dark side.

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    Added an answer on February 21, 2015 at 10:29 am

    This is hinting at a Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde type story but fails to specify a main character and goal. Who is the story about and what does he or she want to achieve? Hope this helps.

    This is hinting at a Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde type story but fails to specify a main character and goal.

    Who is the story about and what does he or she want to achieve?

    Hope this helps.

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