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When a virtuous father sexually connect with his son?s voyeuristic girlfriend, a sinful desire will put his beloved family and loving wife on stake, for discovering of submissive sex.
Cleaver wording and subtlety aside this logline reads a bit too cryptic for its own good. In what way does he connect with the girlfriend? This is the inciting incident I presume if so best to describe it clearly for the reader to envisage the event. The log line lacks a clear goal, what is it the MRead more
Cleaver wording and subtlety aside this logline reads a bit too cryptic for its own good.
In what way does he connect with the girlfriend? This is the inciting incident I presume if so best to describe it clearly for the reader to envisage the event.
The log line lacks a clear goal, what is it the MC wants? How is he going to achieve it?
The process of deciding whether or not to schtupp the girlfriend will only last for the first few minutes of act 2, what happens after this?
Rather similar to American Beauty would be worth while researching the structure of that script.
Hope this helps.
See lessWhen a virtuous father sexually connect with his son?s voyeuristic girlfriend, a sinful desire will put his beloved family and loving wife on stake, for discovering of submissive sex.
Cleaver wording and subtlety aside this logline reads a bit too cryptic for its own good. In what way does he connect with the girlfriend? This is the inciting incident I presume if so best to describe it clearly for the reader to envisage the event. The log line lacks a clear goal, what is it the MRead more
Cleaver wording and subtlety aside this logline reads a bit too cryptic for its own good.
In what way does he connect with the girlfriend? This is the inciting incident I presume if so best to describe it clearly for the reader to envisage the event.
The log line lacks a clear goal, what is it the MC wants? How is he going to achieve it?
The process of deciding whether or not to schtupp the girlfriend will only last for the first few minutes of act 2, what happens after this?
Rather similar to American Beauty would be worth while researching the structure of that script.
Hope this helps.
See lessSera is the story of a young and ignorant prince who is forced to abandon his love for a girl when he must assume the throne. As his reign and age grow old and the kingdom falls into ruin, he must make a choice between power or love.
No need to mentioned the title in the log line also no need to mention the genre, ideally the genre will be evident in a good logline. Choosing is not action. Action is what is done after choosing between the lesser of two evils and action defines your character. If the Prince (presumably now king)Read more
No need to mentioned the title in the log line also no need to mention the genre, ideally the genre will be evident in a good logline.
Choosing is not action.
Action is what is done after choosing between the lesser of two evils and action defines your character.
If the Prince (presumably now king) wants the girl she is his goal, end of act 3 they run into each others arms (in slow mo), kiss and doves fly over head. How he gets to that result is what will make the story an interesting one.
However, if he wants the throne he just needs to take it, no dilemma in this case. Best to create an obstacle stopping him from getting the throne, end of act 3 he stands victoriously on the balcony of the palace, his adoring people cheer on their one true king and doves fly over head… How he gets to that result is what will make the story an interesting one.
Hoe this helps.
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