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A drama series that follows three young aspiring fashion designers as the find themselves entangled in a power struggle against each other and the ruthless matriarch of the Australian fashion industry.
If this is a logline for a TV drama series best to structure the logline around the pilot episode and let the specifics of the situation that sets up the premise for season one form the logline. Most TV producers want to hear a good idea that can set up story potential rather than the actual story oRead more
If this is a logline for a TV drama series best to structure the logline around the pilot episode and let the specifics of the situation that sets up the premise for season one form the logline.
Most TV producers want to hear a good idea that can set up story potential rather than the actual story of the episodes.
Must the story be about 3 designers, can it not be about 1?
What is the specific event that puts the MCs on a collision course with the industry matriarch?
What is the MCs goal?
Make the event that puts them in with the matriarch your inciting incident then give the main characters a description that would make it particularly difficult for them to achieve their goal.
Hope this helps.
See lessA drama series that follows three young aspiring fashion designers as the find themselves entangled in a power struggle against each other and the ruthless matriarch of the Australian fashion industry.
If this is a logline for a TV drama series best to structure the logline around the pilot episode and let the specifics of the situation that sets up the premise for season one form the logline. Most TV producers want to hear a good idea that can set up story potential rather than the actual story oRead more
If this is a logline for a TV drama series best to structure the logline around the pilot episode and let the specifics of the situation that sets up the premise for season one form the logline.
Most TV producers want to hear a good idea that can set up story potential rather than the actual story of the episodes.
Must the story be about 3 designers, can it not be about 1?
What is the specific event that puts the MCs on a collision course with the industry matriarch?
What is the MCs goal?
Make the event that puts them in with the matriarch your inciting incident then give the main characters a description that would make it particularly difficult for them to achieve their goal.
Hope this helps.
See lessAfter the death of his wife, A confident salesman is sent to prison for assault and his children put in care, upon his release he enlist the help of his brother lawyer to regain custody but is he stable and will the children have bonded with the foster parents.
I would add for audience empathy sake: "After wrongly accused of manslaughter and serving ten years..." This makes him an underdog fighting his way up rather than a man in search of redemption. Hope this helps.
I would add for audience empathy sake: “After wrongly accused of manslaughter and serving ten years…”
This makes him an underdog fighting his way up rather than a man in search of redemption.
Hope this helps.
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