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When an out of work teacher is given a deadline by a loan shark, he contracts a hit-man on himself so his family can collect on his life insurance. However after he befriends the hit-man they decide to fake his death instead.
The CEO didn't embezzle any money the jealous board member did and framed her for it. Her sin was to secretly loan money from a loan shark and sell all her assets (not including her company shares) to save the company. The board member tries to discredit her by framing her for embezzlement and coercRead more
The CEO didn’t embezzle any money the jealous board member did and framed her for it. Her sin was to secretly loan money from a loan shark and sell all her assets (not including her company shares) to save the company. The board member tries to discredit her by framing her for embezzlement and coercing the loan shark to put pressure on her to make her sell her shares.
If it wasn’t for him she would eventually had paid off the loan and earned enough money to see herself through retirement and her daughter through university. However she would have never change in her proudly elitist behavior.
See lessWhen an out of work teacher is given a deadline by a loan shark, he contracts a hit-man on himself so his family can collect on his life insurance. However after he befriends the hit-man they decide to fake his death instead.
The CEO didn't embezzle any money the jealous board member did and framed her for it. Her sin was to secretly loan money from a loan shark and sell all her assets (not including her company shares) to save the company. The board member tries to discredit her by framing her for embezzlement and coercRead more
The CEO didn’t embezzle any money the jealous board member did and framed her for it. Her sin was to secretly loan money from a loan shark and sell all her assets (not including her company shares) to save the company. The board member tries to discredit her by framing her for embezzlement and coercing the loan shark to put pressure on her to make her sell her shares.
If it wasn’t for him she would eventually had paid off the loan and earned enough money to see herself through retirement and her daughter through university. However she would have never change in her proudly elitist behavior.
See lessWhen an out of work teacher is given a deadline by a loan shark, he contracts a hit-man on himself so his family can collect on his life insurance. However after he befriends the hit-man they decide to fake his death instead.
Hi guys I've been working on this idea and have come up with a new draft of the logline. Aside from the comments above that have helped shape the logline. I had a problem with the leap of logic of going from being a high-flying (supposedly law abiding "good" citizen) CEO to wanting to fake her own dRead more
Hi guys I’ve been working on this idea and have come up with a new draft of the logline.
Aside from the comments above that have helped shape the logline. I had a problem with the leap of logic of going from being a high-flying (supposedly law abiding “good” citizen) CEO to wanting to fake her own death. So I thought perhaps better to specify a single clear antagonist and his motives and heighten the stakes to motivate her more to do what she does.
After a jealous board member frames a high-flying CEO for embezzlement she hires a hit man to fake her own death to avoid jail but they end up working together to bring the jealous board member to justice.
Any thoughts would be greatly appreciated.
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