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When a hooker attempts to steal a wallet from a drunken john, she accidentally makes a horrific discovery — the couple is not alone in a shabby room of a love hotel.
In my mind finding a dead body is a weak inciting incident because it is something she does herself, could have easily avoided and chooses to make something of it rather than just run away after seeing the body. But if the inciting incident was her being accused of murder. That would be something thRead more
In my mind finding a dead body is a weak inciting incident because it is something she does herself, could have easily avoided and chooses to make something of it rather than just run away after seeing the body.
But if the inciting incident was her being accused of murder. That would be something that is done to her by an external force and she has to take action to fix it. More so presumably being a prostitute her character will be held at doubt and it would be harder for her to convince people of her innocence. So she has a built in obstacle as the MC.
See lessWhen a hooker attempts to steal a wallet from a drunken john, she accidentally makes a horrific discovery — the couple is not alone in a shabby room of a love hotel.
In my mind finding a dead body is a weak inciting incident because it is something she does herself, could have easily avoided and chooses to make something of it rather than just run away after seeing the body. But if the inciting incident was her being accused of murder. That would be something thRead more
In my mind finding a dead body is a weak inciting incident because it is something she does herself, could have easily avoided and chooses to make something of it rather than just run away after seeing the body.
But if the inciting incident was her being accused of murder. That would be something that is done to her by an external force and she has to take action to fix it. More so presumably being a prostitute her character will be held at doubt and it would be harder for her to convince people of her innocence. So she has a built in obstacle as the MC.
See lessA disillusioned nuclear missile silo officer, yearning for job satisfaction, gets more than he bargained for when Earth is occupied by alien invaders and saving mankind means destroying Washington DC.
This sounds like a great idea for a low budget film with huge commercial potential if made from the perspective of the officer from with in the silo. The logline has almost everything it needs, I would say though, in the wrong order and with to many descriptions that don't push the stakes and personRead more
This sounds like a great idea for a low budget film with huge commercial potential if made from the perspective of the officer from with in the silo.
The logline has almost everything it needs, I would say though, in the wrong order and with to many descriptions that don’t push the stakes and personal conflict to the max.
My try:
When an alien force attacks earth a disillusioned officer in control of the last nuclear silo must destroy the invading forces Generals in their newly established head quarters set up in Washington DC in order to save mankind.
Hope this helps.
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