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  1. Posted: August 22, 2014In: Public

    When a naively sentimental clown doctor is approached by an 8 year old cancer patient in the hospital a bond is made and he must find a way to make the boy smile and learn to not get attached himself.

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    Added an answer on September 10, 2014 at 9:50 am

    Thanks for the clarification I think that may have gotten lost in translation. All good though, much appreciate the constructive feedback very helpful as usual. Nir.

    Thanks for the clarification I think that may have gotten lost in translation.

    All good though, much appreciate the constructive feedback very helpful as usual.

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  2. Posted: August 22, 2014In: Public

    When a naively sentimental clown doctor is approached by an 8 year old cancer patient in the hospital a bond is made and he must find a way to make the boy smile and learn to not get attached himself.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on September 10, 2014 at 9:50 am

    Thanks for the clarification I think that may have gotten lost in translation. All good though, much appreciate the constructive feedback very helpful as usual. Nir.

    Thanks for the clarification I think that may have gotten lost in translation.

    All good though, much appreciate the constructive feedback very helpful as usual.

    Nir.

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2014In: Public

    When an out of work teacher is given a deadline by a loan shark, he contracts a hit-man on himself so his family can collect on his life insurance. However after he befriends the hit-man they decide to fake his death instead.

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    Added an answer on September 9, 2014 at 2:26 pm

    Good point about killing the loan shark defeating the antagonist in this case permanently eliminating the threat is the obligatory scene. Only reason I wanted them to fake the MCs death was to find a way out of the financial strife. Will keep working on it.

    Good point about killing the loan shark defeating the antagonist in this case permanently eliminating the threat is the obligatory scene. Only reason I wanted them to fake the MCs death was to find a way out of the financial strife.

    Will keep working on it.

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