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When her prison transport plane crashes, a lawyer wrongfully accused of fraud, must avoid the FBI and escape from the vengeful husband who framed her to realize her dream.
In my mind better to re post a new version of a logline under the same original posted comments. Realizing her dream seams unrelated to the plot at hand if she is escaping her husband and trying to prove her innocence. As previously mentioned this is very similar to The Fugitive but instead of onlyRead more
In my mind better to re post a new version of a logline under the same original posted comments.
Realizing her dream seams unrelated to the plot at hand if she is escaping her husband and trying to prove her innocence.
As previously mentioned this is very similar to The Fugitive but instead of only law enforcement after the MC it’s the spouse as well.
It seams like the stakes are not high enough if the husband framed her of fraud what will he do if he catches her again? Frame her for tax evasion? But if he were to try and kill her or someone she loves then the stakes would be primal and clearer to anyone reading the logline.
See lessWhen her prison transport plane crashes, a lawyer wrongfully accused of fraud, must avoid the FBI and escape from the vengeful husband who framed her to realize her dream.
In my mind better to re post a new version of a logline under the same original posted comments. Realizing her dream seams unrelated to the plot at hand if she is escaping her husband and trying to prove her innocence. As previously mentioned this is very similar to The Fugitive but instead of onlyRead more
In my mind better to re post a new version of a logline under the same original posted comments.
Realizing her dream seams unrelated to the plot at hand if she is escaping her husband and trying to prove her innocence.
As previously mentioned this is very similar to The Fugitive but instead of only law enforcement after the MC it’s the spouse as well.
It seams like the stakes are not high enough if the husband framed her of fraud what will he do if he catches her again? Frame her for tax evasion? But if he were to try and kill her or someone she loves then the stakes would be primal and clearer to anyone reading the logline.
See lessSuffering from years of child abuse, an estranged man who lives under his bed must slowly break away from his imagination with the arrival of a newborn sister.
"...break away..." being described as the main action sounds vague as we don't know what breaking away from ones imagination means much less doing it slowly. Further more why would he suddenly break away now? If it's the sister that's his motivation how can that be if he lives under the bed? I thinkRead more
“…break away…” being described as the main action sounds vague as we don’t know what breaking away from ones imagination means much less doing it slowly.
Further more why would he suddenly break away now? If it’s the sister that’s his motivation how can that be if he lives under the bed?
I think the idea is that a traumatized man fears for the safety of his new born sister. But we don’t understand the stakes, the antagonist and nature of his trauma. Also the logline has too much description that is unrelated directly to the plot and action the MC takes in the story such as years of suffering or living under the bed.
Hope this helps.
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