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  1. Posted: August 15, 2014In: Public

    A serial womaniser discovers women from his past are murdered soon after making amends and must find their killer before an inoperable brain tumour kills him.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on August 16, 2014 at 12:41 pm

    Just realized the auto spell check changed my post from; ticking time bomb, to chicken time bomb. For my post above please take this into account when reading. Thanks.

    Just realized the auto spell check changed my post from; ticking time bomb, to chicken time bomb. For my post above please take this into account when reading.
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  2. Posted: August 15, 2014In: Public

    A serial womaniser discovers women from his past are murdered soon after making amends and must find their killer before an inoperable brain tumour kills him.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on August 16, 2014 at 12:41 pm

    Just realized the auto spell check changed my post from; ticking time bomb, to chicken time bomb. For my post above please take this into account when reading. Thanks.

    Just realized the auto spell check changed my post from; ticking time bomb, to chicken time bomb. For my post above please take this into account when reading.
    Thanks.

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  3. Posted: August 15, 2014In: Public

    A serial womaniser discovers women from his past are murdered soon after making amends and must find their killer before an inoperable brain tumour kills him.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on August 15, 2014 at 3:37 pm

    It seams like the brain tumor is an element external to the story added as a "chicken time bomb" rather than an integral part of the story that creates the "chicken time bomb" effect. Also the combination of ex horse and serial womanizer give the impression of a man who cheats on horses. WomanizingRead more

    It seams like the brain tumor is an element external to the story added as a “chicken time bomb” rather than an integral part of the story that creates the “chicken time bomb” effect.

    Also the combination of ex horse and serial womanizer give the impression of a man who cheats on horses. Womanizing in itself is not a flaw but cheating is, perhaps then use this as a flan for him to fix about himself.

    Using Richiev’s version:
    After cheating on his girlfriend a serial womanizer is framed for her muffin and threatened by the killer he must now discover who the killer is to save his own life.

    Hope this helps.

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