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Three rock music fans must overcome the isolation of personal soundscapes to find joy together.
Not sure what this logline is aimed at achieving, it sounds like your describing an audio visual technique on stage. where as a logline would typically be used to road test core plot points of a story. Perhaps try thinking of the play in terms of the dramatic device that is currently preventing theRead more
Not sure what this logline is aimed at achieving, it sounds like your describing an audio visual technique on stage. where as a logline would typically be used to road test core plot points of a story.
Perhaps try thinking of the play in terms of the dramatic device that is currently preventing the 3 characters from finding joy. Then call the 3 characters the protagonists (a multi protagonist plot) and the dramatic device the obstacle. From this you could perhaps figure out the action the protagonists need to do to achieve their goal joy.
To help you wold perhaps need to answer these kind of questions for your self – Why cover up their ears? why uncover their ears? What is motivating them to play music and why are they in isolation in the first place? etc…
Hope this helps.
See lessWhen an unorthodox AFP detective, with a confrontational personality, uncovers an operation of a Mexican drug cartel in Australia. He must now stop a one ton inbound shipment of heroin with the help of an uptight FBI agent after the same gang.
True about the drug cartel's ethnicity being miss placed, however, I did read that Mexican cartels are in fact trafficking cocaine to Oz not sure about the amounts or frequencies when compared to Asian ones. In my mind it was a small leap from one drug to the next and if anything more of an alarmingRead more
True about the drug cartel’s ethnicity being miss placed, however, I did read that Mexican cartels are in fact trafficking cocaine to Oz not sure about the amounts or frequencies when compared to Asian ones. In my mind it was a small leap from one drug to the next and if anything more of an alarming event for local police to discover a new illegal organization on their soil.
As for the FBI v DEA the FBI deal with drugs as well and to that matter also collaborate with other countries whereas the DEA deals with drugs in the US not outside.
Reason for the FBI agent to get involved was he is tracking the same organization that smuggles drugs into the US. If he is able to catch them in Australia that would weaken them and help him stop them on his home ground.
Changing Mexican to Asian is a technicality so thanks for pointing it out. Not sure if this is a good plot device am trying to contrast an FBI agent with an ausie cop.
See lessAlso it isn’t personal for the protagonist should it be necessarily in a buddy cop logline?
When an unorthodox AFP detective, with a confrontational personality, uncovers an operation of a Mexican drug cartel in Australia. He must now stop a one ton inbound shipment of heroin with the help of an uptight FBI agent after the same gang.
True about the drug cartel's ethnicity being miss placed, however, I did read that Mexican cartels are in fact trafficking cocaine to Oz not sure about the amounts or frequencies when compared to Asian ones. In my mind it was a small leap from one drug to the next and if anything more of an alarmingRead more
True about the drug cartel’s ethnicity being miss placed, however, I did read that Mexican cartels are in fact trafficking cocaine to Oz not sure about the amounts or frequencies when compared to Asian ones. In my mind it was a small leap from one drug to the next and if anything more of an alarming event for local police to discover a new illegal organization on their soil.
As for the FBI v DEA the FBI deal with drugs as well and to that matter also collaborate with other countries whereas the DEA deals with drugs in the US not outside.
Reason for the FBI agent to get involved was he is tracking the same organization that smuggles drugs into the US. If he is able to catch them in Australia that would weaken them and help him stop them on his home ground.
Changing Mexican to Asian is a technicality so thanks for pointing it out. Not sure if this is a good plot device am trying to contrast an FBI agent with an ausie cop.
See lessAlso it isn’t personal for the protagonist should it be necessarily in a buddy cop logline?