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After his aunt dies, a notoriously obnoxious lawyer will inherit 100 million dollars on the condition that he gets 5000 new friends on facebook within a week without using a computer. Or loose the money to a rival lawyer in charge of her estate.
As now the last of his family line his aunt wanted him to stop being self centered. So with the help of her lawyer (younger and therefor tech savvy) she wrote a clause into her will that forces him to prove he has changed with the numeric proof of face book friends by a certain date. Frankly I don'tRead more
As now the last of his family line his aunt wanted him to stop being self centered. So with the help of her lawyer (younger and therefor tech savvy) she wrote a clause into her will that forces him to prove he has changed with the numeric proof of face book friends by a certain date.
Frankly I don’t think a week is enough and instead of friends it should be followers to allow for a larger number and flexibility in reasons to connect with him.
She knew that he couldn’t achieve this without pursuing acts of generosity and kindness or else people would un friend or un follow him after he either convinces or pays them.
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Cheers.
See lessAfter his aunt dies, a notoriously obnoxious lawyer will inherit 100 million dollars on the condition that he gets 5000 new friends on facebook within a week without using a computer. Or loose the money to a rival lawyer in charge of her estate.
As now the last of his family line his aunt wanted him to stop being self centered. So with the help of her lawyer (younger and therefor tech savvy) she wrote a clause into her will that forces him to prove he has changed with the numeric proof of face book friends by a certain date. Frankly I don'tRead more
As now the last of his family line his aunt wanted him to stop being self centered. So with the help of her lawyer (younger and therefor tech savvy) she wrote a clause into her will that forces him to prove he has changed with the numeric proof of face book friends by a certain date.
Frankly I don’t think a week is enough and instead of friends it should be followers to allow for a larger number and flexibility in reasons to connect with him.
She knew that he couldn’t achieve this without pursuing acts of generosity and kindness or else people would un friend or un follow him after he either convinces or pays them.
Do you think this needs clarification in the logline?
Cheers.
See lessFiddle,young talented violin player is about to run away from most hated things in his life – the violin and his father that painfully bullies him into play all his life.Only thing that turns up as a obstacle is Fiddle?s evil mind, personified as a mysterious being that evokes a a very radical thoughts inside him.
I see sounds to me like you have 2 antagonists the evil part of his split personality and the father. Why not choose one and keep that one in the logline that will help to narrow down the descriptions of the obstacle. Also no need to name it as an obstacle by the way just describe the way in which iRead more
I see sounds to me like you have 2 antagonists the evil part of his split personality and the father.
Why not choose one and keep that one in the logline that will help to narrow down the descriptions of the obstacle. Also no need to name it as an obstacle by the way just describe the way in which it hinders his efforts.
Nir.
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