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Death has not any trouble killing anyone, but an old man hides his scythe and makes Death go back to his house to kill him, in that time he prepares a surprise for Death.
Kind of sounds like the old Russian tale called 'The Soldier and Death' where a man traps Death in a magical sack and prevents him from doing his work. The logline needs clarification as to who is the MC and who is the AN starts off as if Death is MC but then the POV switches to the old man. WhilstRead more
Kind of sounds like the old Russian tale called ‘The Soldier and Death’ where a man traps Death in a magical sack and prevents him from doing his work.
The logline needs clarification as to who is the MC and who is the AN starts off as if Death is MC but then the POV switches to the old man.
Whilst the motivations are clear as, old man wants to live and Death wants to kill, it needs a clear stat to the story what incident sparks the events off.
Nir.
See lessA woman must decide whether to stand by her husband after she discovers he was part of a gang that carried out a vicious, racist attack 22 years earlier. She is black. He is white.
Perhaps try and start with the discovery first then bring in the decision and definitely as Sharkeatingman suggested describe her more accurately. Only thing is the MC could use more of a force to struggle with to add weight to the moral dilemma. Perhaps their child is the victim of a recent attackRead more
Perhaps try and start with the discovery first then bring in the decision and definitely as Sharkeatingman suggested describe her more accurately.
Only thing is the MC could use more of a force to struggle with to add weight to the moral dilemma. Perhaps their child is the victim of a recent attack or someone close to her was killed by the husbands gang years before etc…
Because the logline seams to lack a clear AN and needs a more significant struggle that said sounds interesting would love to see such a story.
After discovering her husband was responsible for a racist attack years before a black (enter job title or other character description) must decide whether to stand by him or not in light of history repeating itself on their child.
Hope this helps Nir.
See lessWhen pure evil responds to the Arecibo message, a lowly NASA clerk must convince his superiors that planet Earth is facing doomsday, and nobody cares.
Yup nothing like a good bad guy...
Yup nothing like a good bad guy…
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