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After the eccentric field reporter she’s been ordered to keep sober falls off the wagon, a camera shy PA must over come her case of Tourettes in order to bring back a huge story or lose her job.
How will she go about bringing back the story? I think you mean she steps in front of the camera her self, right? If so, specify it. Otherwise, this seems rather lean on plot. She picks up the mic and delivers the news report - end of story. This feels more like one scene in the first act of a featuRead more
How will she go about bringing back the story? I think you mean she steps in front of the camera her self, right? If so, specify it.
Otherwise, this seems rather lean on plot. She picks up the mic and delivers the news report – end of story. This feels more like one scene in the first act of a feature. Is this a short film?
Last note, the stakes are pretty low, is her job all she cares about in this story?
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This can work as a premise for a comedy, but the wording needs to change. I'd also add that the inciting incident isn't strong on account of it being a matter of his own doing - he let the wedding go over budget. The best inciting incidents happen out of the MC's control and dramatically affect themRead more
This can work as a premise for a comedy, but the wording needs to change.
I’d also add that the inciting incident isn’t strong on account of it being a matter of his own doing – he let the wedding go over budget. The best inciting incidents happen out of the MC’s control and dramatically affect them.
What if the mother in law made the wedding go over budget? This would at least mean the event caught him by surprise.
The other problem with this concept is that the main action is the MC filling out forms and filing tax reports… this is uncinematic, is there anything else he can do to his rich client?
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Just post a new version in the thread, when a user searches for the latest posts it will come in closer to the top of the list.
Just post a new version in the thread, when a user searches for the latest posts it will come in closer to the top of the list.
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