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Desperate for his father?s approval, a conceited journalist takes a job at his small town newspaper. But when he discovers a drug scandal brewing within the local football club, he pursues the story even though it will implicate his athlete brother.
Sorry, I've been unclear in my question. Don't you think the irony of the story, not the drug scandal itself, works better if to impress the father he throws his brother under the bus? Thus, requiring clarification early on that his motivation is to impress the father?
Sorry, I’ve been unclear in my question. Don’t you think the irony of the story, not the drug scandal itself, works better if to impress the father he throws his brother under the bus? Thus, requiring clarification early on that his motivation is to impress the father?
See less"An 86 year old man relives his past lives through hypnotic regression, but in one fateful session, a blurry vision shows him his possible next life and that his current one is about to end soon and the strange man from an unknown agency has to make the toughest moral decision."
Hey mate - from the first sentence I can tell this is not actually a logline, it's more of an elevator pitch. Check out this section of the site for pointers: https://loglines.org/howto/ Who is your protagonist? The 86 year old man about to die? Or the Strange Agency Man? What is the event that kickRead more
Hey mate – from the first sentence I can tell this is not actually a logline, it’s more of an elevator pitch. Check out this section of the site for pointers: https://loglines.org/howto/
Who is your protagonist? The 86 year old man about to die? Or the Strange Agency Man?
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What is the action that sees us through the majority of Act 2?
Desperate for his father?s approval, a conceited journalist takes a job at his small town newspaper. But when he discovers a drug scandal brewing within the local football club, he pursues the story even though it will implicate his athlete brother.
Don't you think the irony of pursuing the drug scandal works better if we know that the protagonist's driving motivation is for his father's approval, even if it means destroying the career (and I guess life and dreams) of another member of his family?
Don’t you think the irony of pursuing the drug scandal works better if we know that the protagonist’s driving motivation is for his father’s approval, even if it means destroying the career (and I guess life and dreams) of another member of his family?
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