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A na?ve young woman is raised to believe she is a super spy doing good in the world, but when an enraged lunatic attacks her and accuses her of murdering his wife, she must flee her sheltered little world to discover the truth.
Oh, also - she's not literally raised by wolves, right? Only because when you pair this logline with that title, it took me a while to figure out, 'the wolves are a metaphor.' Maybe rethink the title?
Oh, also – she’s not literally raised by wolves, right? Only because when you pair this logline with that title, it took me a while to figure out, ‘the wolves are a metaphor.’ Maybe rethink the title?
See lessA na?ve young woman is raised to believe she is a super spy doing good in the world, but when an enraged lunatic attacks her and accuses her of murdering his wife, she must flee her sheltered little world to discover the truth.
I'd trim a little out of the middle section of this logline: "A naive young woman is raised believing she is a super spy doing good in the world, but when she is attacked and accused of murder, she must clear her name before ... (like Riley asks, what exactly is at stake? Her reputation? Her life? TRead more
I’d trim a little out of the middle section of this logline:
“A naive young woman is raised believing she is a super spy doing good in the world, but when she is attacked and accused of murder, she must clear her name before … (like Riley asks, what exactly is at stake? Her reputation? Her life? The life of someone else?)”
I assume that’s why she wants “the truth” (about the murder), and subsequently why “the truth” (about her upbringing) is revealed to her.
See lessLoot follows a modern day robin hood and his merry men, who have their own personal brand of 'philanthropy', as they search for love in West Texas, but they end up getting wrapped up in a criminal underworld that tests the love that they find.
"Loot follows a modern day robin hood and his merry men" - this is superflous text. A (character flaw here) philanthropist searches for love in West Texas, but gets caught up in a criminal underworld. What is the main bulk of your film about (or would you like it to be about)? Is act 2 mostly aboutRead more
“Loot follows a modern day robin hood and his merry men” – this is superflous text.
See lessA (character flaw here) philanthropist searches for love in West Texas, but gets caught up in a criminal underworld.
What is the main bulk of your film about (or would you like it to be about)? Is act 2 mostly about him going around and trying to hook up with Texans, or is it about him being dragged against his will into the criminal underworld?
In either case, what is the goal, and what does he stand to lose?