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A young immigrant finds himself lost in Mexico City where he meets a charismatic street vendor who introduces him to selling pirate music in the city underground
This logline reveals an interesting set up for a story, but as has been noted previously, lacks stakes and an antagonist. What probably will clarify things for you is if you work the protagonist's goal into the logline - "After a street vendor inducts him into the world of music piracy, a timid immiRead more
This logline reveals an interesting set up for a story, but as has been noted previously, lacks stakes and an antagonist. What probably will clarify things for you is if you work the protagonist’s goal into the logline – “After a street vendor inducts him into the world of music piracy, a timid immigrant must (goal), before (antagonist & stakes).”
See lessWhen the world?s #1 hacker contracts a digital virus created by the omnipresent MegaCorps, he must rise up and bring down the system he has been leeching off for so long.
ugh ... *course of action. Sorry.
ugh … *course of action. Sorry.
See lessWhen the world?s #1 hacker contracts a digital virus created by the omnipresent MegaCorps, he must rise up and bring down the system he has been leeching off for so long.
What are the stakes? Why does this hacker have to rise up and take down this system? (the link between him getting a virus and having to take such a drastic cause of action is totally unclear to me). Also ... where's the irony in a story about a great hacker having to continue doing what hackers do?
What are the stakes? Why does this hacker have to rise up and take down this system? (the link between him getting a virus and having to take such a drastic cause of action is totally unclear to me). Also … where’s the irony in a story about a great hacker having to continue doing what hackers do?
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