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Who is Snowden and why did he do what he did? Is Snowden a hero or traitor?
Read the "write it" section of the logline. Okay, great, you want to write a story about Snowden. But who is your protagonist, what is their goal, who is trying to stop them from achieving that goal?
Read the “write it” section of the logline. Okay, great, you want to write a story about Snowden. But who is your protagonist, what is their goal, who is trying to stop them from achieving that goal?
See lessA girl is pulled over by the police officer who raped her mother 5 years ago. Out of sheer panic she tries to escape.
Agreed with the above - this offers great drama and conflict for a single scene, perhaps even the catalyst for your story, but once your protagonist escapes, what is her objective goal?
Agreed with the above – this offers great drama and conflict for a single scene, perhaps even the catalyst for your story, but once your protagonist escapes, what is her objective goal?
See lessWhen the Imperial head chef is beheaded for serving uninventive dishes, the sous chef must obtain a magic cookbook in order to execute a dish pleasing to the Emperor before he and his staff are beheaded.
I'd say pretty close ... but I'd love some more definition of what "must obtain" entails? Does it mean he has to travel over the entire country to get it, or does it mean besting an old master chef at a cook off? The budget for the two movies would be entirely different, so please clarify. "When hisRead more
I’d say pretty close … but I’d love some more definition of what “must obtain” entails? Does it mean he has to travel over the entire country to get it, or does it mean besting an old master chef at a cook off? The budget for the two movies would be entirely different, so please clarify.
“When his predecessor is beheaded for serving an uninspired menu, a timid chef must secure a magic recipe from an order of mountain-dwelling monks before the Emperor’s fortnightly banquet, or face the chopping block himself.”
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