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  1. Posted: October 8, 2013In: Public

    When the Imperial head chef is beheaded for serving uninventive dishes, the sous chef must obtain a magic cookbook in order to execute a dish pleasing to the Emperor before he and his staff are beheaded.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on October 10, 2013 at 10:14 am

    Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade has a beheading in it, and that's PG-13 right?

    Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade has a beheading in it, and that’s PG-13 right?

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  2. Posted: October 9, 2013In: Public

    WGA Registration Number: 1680921 An older black woman who suffers from insomnia. She is afraid to fall asleep because once she does she is placed inside a real life threatening situation that she must save the ones involved or they will all die. She tries to convince friends what is happening… They think she is loosing her mind and want to put her into a mental asylum to get help…The only way she is able to awake is when they are brought to safety…..

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on October 10, 2013 at 10:11 am

    You've been too vague, so I don't know what your story is about. Your protagonist doesn't want to sleep because her life is in danger? In what way? How will she "save the ones she loves"? What must she do? Who or what is threatening their lives? Why is this character the one who must save them? I'mRead more

    You’ve been too vague, so I don’t know what your story is about. Your protagonist doesn’t want to sleep because her life is in danger? In what way? How will she “save the ones she loves”? What must she do? Who or what is threatening their lives? Why is this character the one who must save them? I’m so confused …

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  3. Posted: October 10, 2013In: Public

    When the NSA director admits to domestic spying then solicits the aid of the best hackers, a small band of hackers decide to fight what they feel is wrong only to be entwined in an international terrorist threat and discover their initial instincts were wrong.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on October 10, 2013 at 10:08 am

    This is a concept, not a logline. As andrewclau says above, you haven't identified any of the important points that would allow us to understand your story - the most important of which is surely a protagonist (the who) and a clearly stated objective goal ("to fight what they feel is wrong" is WAY tRead more

    This is a concept, not a logline. As andrewclau says above, you haven’t identified any of the important points that would allow us to understand your story – the most important of which is surely a protagonist (the who) and a clearly stated objective goal (“to fight what they feel is wrong” is WAY too vague. What does that look like on the screen? How will I as a potential investor in your product be able to tell whether your hero has or hasn’t achieved their goal?)

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