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A small mid-western town is terrorized by parasitic worms that bubble up from the local quarry swimming hole. (Found Footage)
Who is your protagonist? What is their goal in all of this?
Who is your protagonist? What is their goal in all of this?
See lessThe week before his wedding, the groom gets a swift kick in the nuts causing him to see his girlfriend?s baby as a grown man in a onesie who guides him and tests him on his readiness for marriage and fatherhood.
May I suggest a revision? "After a kick to the genitals causes an immature groom to hallucinate that his fiance's infant is a full grown man, ..." What is the actual GOAL that this character has, after such a bizarre incident? Who is the ANTAGONIST, and what are the STAKES of failure?
May I suggest a revision?
“After a kick to the genitals causes an immature groom to hallucinate that his fiance’s infant is a full grown man, …”
What is the actual GOAL that this character has, after such a bizarre incident? Who is the ANTAGONIST, and what are the STAKES of failure?
See lessWhen their covers are blown on a mission to seduce Yugoslav President Marshal Tito, a nebbish diplomat must smuggle Marilyn Monroe, the US?s biggest movie star and newest spy, out of Yugoslavia before their blunder leads to all-out war.
I see you've made the changes I suggested - which is very flattering! My question is now ... what would they hope to gain by seducing Tito? This would be the overarching goal, I assume, and likely to be higher stakes than just seducing him?
I see you’ve made the changes I suggested – which is very flattering! My question is now … what would they hope to gain by seducing Tito? This would be the overarching goal, I assume, and likely to be higher stakes than just seducing him?
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