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  1. Posted: September 10, 2013In: Public

    To get the girl of his dreams a timid momma?s boy must team up with the local cat burglar, but her unorthodox methods put more than his love life at risk.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on September 11, 2013 at 3:59 pm

    As above ... there is no clear causal link between teaming up with the cat burglar and winning the girl over. Is there something that the cat burglar has that he makes a deal to get, which will lead to impressing the girl?

    As above … there is no clear causal link between teaming up with the cat burglar and winning the girl over. Is there something that the cat burglar has that he makes a deal to get, which will lead to impressing the girl?

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  2. Posted: September 10, 2013In: Public

    A brilliant Russian Cadet shortly after his graduation day is being targeted by the CIA, his respond was a personal travel to NYC to change all well-known war tactics with the help of his genius weapons.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on September 11, 2013 at 3:58 pm

    I'm sorry Danny, I don't understand what your film is about at all. There is a Russian cadet ... what sort of cadet? Space cadet? (I'm assuming because of the character name). What happens to this cadet that sets off their adventure? Is it about, after failing to protect his president, Yuri plots toRead more

    I’m sorry Danny, I don’t understand what your film is about at all. There is a Russian cadet … what sort of cadet? Space cadet? (I’m assuming because of the character name).

    What happens to this cadet that sets off their adventure? Is it about, after failing to protect his president, Yuri plots to attack America? What is the goal? What happens if the protagonist fails?

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  3. Posted: September 10, 2013In: Public

    The true story of Matthias Sindelar, the Austrian footballer voted as the Sportsman of the Century and killed by Hitler?s Nazi party.

    Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
    Added an answer on September 11, 2013 at 3:55 pm

    I don't know why the Nazis would want him dead? Is there some sort of direct link between him being voted sportsman of the century and his execution? Could you elaborate in that in the logline? At the moment your protagonist is awfully passive; what is his goal in the story?

    I don’t know why the Nazis would want him dead? Is there some sort of direct link between him being voted sportsman of the century and his execution? Could you elaborate in that in the logline?

    At the moment your protagonist is awfully passive; what is his goal in the story?

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