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  1. Posted: May 24, 2019In: Examples

    Picked up by social services after years of living off the grid, a veteran suffering from PTSD and his teenage daughter struggle to integrate into society.

    Karel Segers Samurai
    Added an answer on May 31, 2019 at 7:57 am

    Debra Granik is a genius. WINTER'S BONE was far more traditional in structure, and therefore easier to capture in a logline. Have you done one yet? ;) I think the girl's goal in LNT is to find a home and settle there, very specifically. That's why her unconscious action leads to them being discovereRead more

    Debra Granik is a genius. WINTER’S BONE was far more traditional in structure, and therefore easier to capture in a logline. Have you done one yet? 😉

    I think the girl’s goal in LNT is to find a home and settle there, very specifically. That’s why her unconscious action leads to them being discovered.

    And her father’s (open-ended) goal is NOT to settle anywhere.

    She wants to stay at the first place they’re brought to. Then in the third act, she decides to stay.

     

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  2. Posted: May 24, 2019In: Examples

    Picked up by social services after years of living off the grid, a veteran suffering from PTSD and his teenage daughter struggle to integrate into society.

    Karel Segers Samurai
    Added an answer on May 29, 2019 at 5:24 pm

    I love this film. I would say that it is her story, as she is the one who changes, and makes the climactic decision. How would this change the logline?

    I love this film. I would say that it is her story, as she is the one who changes, and makes the climactic decision. How would this change the logline?

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  3. Posted: May 11, 2019In: Examples, Horror

    In a post-apocalyptic world, a family must remain silent to hide from monsters with ultra-sensitive hearing.

    Karel Segers Samurai
    Added an answer on May 11, 2019 at 9:57 am

    Trivia question: what is the inciting incident in this film? ;)The answer will give you an insight in what might be (one of) the theme(s).

    Trivia question: what is the inciting incident in this film? 😉
    The answer will give you an insight in what might be (one of) the theme(s).

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