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  1. Posted: November 21, 2012In: Public

    A reclusive writer discovers the murders in her novels are becoming reality before they hit the shelves and must work with a suspicious FBI agent to find the killer and clear her name.

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    Added an answer on November 29, 2012 at 11:09 pm

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  2. Posted: November 21, 2012In: Public

    A reclusive writer discovers the murders in her novels are becoming reality before they hit the shelves and must work with a suspicious FBI agent to find the killer and clear her name.

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    Added an answer on November 29, 2012 at 11:08 pm

    Stranger than fiction meets murder mystery! I agree with Steven. It's an intriguing premise with all the right elements, including character flaw, goal and stakes. But how do we keep it under 25 words? Here's my take: When the murders in her novels become a reality, a reclusive writer must prove herRead more

    Stranger than fiction meets murder mystery! I agree with Steven. It’s an intriguing premise with all the right elements, including character flaw, goal and stakes. But how do we keep it under 25 words? Here’s my take:

    When the murders in her novels become a reality, a reclusive writer must prove her innocence by finding the killer.

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  3. Posted: November 21, 2012In: Public

    After returning to the present from a horrifying future he is responsible for, a disillusioned software developer must bring down the corporate giant he works for.

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    Added an answer on November 29, 2012 at 10:45 pm

    Intriguing! Two suggestions: What is the horrifying future? Describing this would really help flesh out the stakes. And can the goal be reworked to make the genre clearer? "Bringing down the corporate giant he works for" could mean action, sci-fi or political drama... Patrockable (Judge)

    Intriguing!

    Two suggestions: What is the horrifying future? Describing this would really help flesh out the stakes.
    And can the goal be reworked to make the genre clearer? “Bringing down the corporate giant he works for” could mean action, sci-fi or political drama…

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