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  1. Posted: June 13, 2013In: Public

    When a spoiled rich law student discovers one of his classmates is a cat burglar, she offers to set him up with his long-time crush in exchange for his silence.

    Paul Clarke Samurai
    Added an answer on June 14, 2013 at 10:36 am

    If that's a title suggestion, I love it. I put it through IMDB and it came up with an old Sandra Bullock, Dennis Leary movie that I hadn't heard of. Quite a different story judging by the synopsis.

    If that’s a title suggestion, I love it.

    I put it through IMDB and it came up with an old Sandra Bullock, Dennis Leary movie that I hadn’t heard of. Quite a different story judging by the synopsis.

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  2. Posted: June 13, 2013In: Public

    When a spoiled rich law student discovers one of his classmates is a cat burglar, she offers to set him up with his long-time crush in exchange for his silence.

    Paul Clarke Samurai
    Added an answer on June 13, 2013 at 11:03 pm

    I see what you mean. Definitely a rom-com combined with a heist film.The idea being that in order to win over the new girl they end up pulling off little missions and break-ins. I'm just not quite sure how to incorporate that into the logline. Maybe I could add: But her unlawful methods could cost hRead more

    I see what you mean. Definitely a rom-com combined with a heist film.The idea being that in order to win over the new girl they end up pulling off little missions and break-ins. I’m just not quite sure how to incorporate that into the logline.

    Maybe I could add: But her unlawful methods could cost him his career/future.

    Not quite sure.

    And yes, the cat burglar is probably the most interesting character and could almost be considered a co-protagonist. But ultimately it is the spoiled rich kid who has to learn and develop. By seeing how hard someone with a less privileged upbringing has to work to get all the things he takes for granted it gives him a better perspective on life.

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  3. Posted: December 13, 2012In: Public

    A small Texas border town fights for its independence from Mexico and the U.S. after an earthquake changes the course of the Rio Grande River and makes it an island.

    Paul Clarke Samurai
    Added an answer on December 13, 2012 at 4:34 pm

    You need to personalize it. Who's the hero of the story? IS it the leader of the town? Someone needs to represent the parties involved on a personal level or we simply won't care. Also, what are the consequences if it doesn't gain independence? Paul, Judge.

    You need to personalize it. Who’s the hero of the story? IS it the leader of the town? Someone needs to represent the parties involved on a personal level or we simply won’t care. Also, what are the consequences if it doesn’t gain independence?

    Paul, Judge.

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