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A frazzled man's secret lives are set to collide when he discovers his wife has invited everyone he knows to his surprise 40th birthday.
An interesting idea. Could be a good start. But the real hook is what the different lives are, and how they are incompatible. It should be something we haven't seen before, hopefully dripping with irony. Also, I don't like 'frazzled'. That's a very temporary emotion rather than a characteristic. HeRead more
An interesting idea. Could be a good start. But the real hook is what the different lives are, and how they are incompatible. It should be something we haven’t seen before, hopefully dripping with irony.
Also, I don’t like ‘frazzled’. That’s a very temporary emotion rather than a characteristic. He would be frazzled because of the impeding chaos at the party. But that doesn’t define who he is. Give us something better.
Paul Clarke (judge)
See lessThere is a company that can reset your life. If you don't feel like you have succeed in life you can just reset your life.
That's not a logline. It's the first part - the setup. Now you need to tell us the protagonist, and why he/she wants to use this service. Plus why they can't, or if they do, what other problems that creates. Paul Clarke (judge).
That’s not a logline. It’s the first part – the setup. Now you need to tell us the protagonist, and why he/she wants to use this service. Plus why they can’t, or if they do, what other problems that creates.
Paul Clarke (judge).
See lessA young immigrant finds himself lost in Mexico City where he meets a charismatic street vendor who introduces him to selling pirate music in the city underground
I'd like to know something more about the protagonist. Rather than just being young, is he naive? a farm boy? Anything that makes the selling of pirated music more interesting, more ironic.
I’d like to know something more about the protagonist. Rather than just being young, is he naive? a farm boy? Anything that makes the selling of pirated music more interesting, more ironic.
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