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  1. Posted: June 19, 2012In: Public

    A disparate and desperate group of people transcend their hopelessness and band together to find their voice, rediscovering, under the baton of their choirmaster, a dignity and purpose that their ravaged lives had threatened to destroy

    Paul Clarke Samurai
    Added an answer on June 22, 2012 at 12:02 am

    I thoroughly agree with Steve. Sounds like a light hearted feel-good drama with a sprinkle of laughs. You could get a lovely ensemble cast of misfits who work through their own INTERNAL issues, and all become better people... An absolutely nobody is going to pay to see that. Spice it up. Add some inRead more

    I thoroughly agree with Steve.

    Sounds like a light hearted feel-good drama with a sprinkle of laughs. You could get a lovely ensemble cast of misfits who work through their own INTERNAL issues, and all become better people… An absolutely nobody is going to pay to see that. Spice it up. Add some interesting and original external conflict and you could have a real story.

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  2. Posted: June 19, 2012In: Public

    Twenty-year-old Nicole is a cleaner at a prestigious art college but dreams of becoming a glass blower. When a new teacher, Kiera, discovers her talent Nicole accepts her help and they form an unconventional relationship leading Nicole to a buried secret that has been kept from her since she was a child.

    Paul Clarke Samurai
    Added an answer on June 21, 2012 at 11:56 pm

    Too much focus on her becoming a glass-blower and not enough on the secret. I'm assuming the teacher discovering her is a first act development, so the buried secret is where the story starts. Where do we go from here - What is she trying to do? (she already has her dream job after all) And what's sRead more

    Too much focus on her becoming a glass-blower and not enough on the secret.

    I’m assuming the teacher discovering her is a first act development, so the buried secret is where the story starts. Where do we go from here – What is she trying to do? (she already has her dream job after all) And what’s stopping her?

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  3. Posted: June 19, 2012In: Public

    A haunting tale of a family in extremis, based on her own novel

    Paul Clarke Samurai
    Added an answer on June 21, 2012 at 11:51 pm

    Not enough information for any constructive feedback. What is the novel about?

    Not enough information for any constructive feedback. What is the novel about?

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