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In early 1997, Anu Singh, a young law student at the Australian National University, began to tell many people she was planning to kill herself. As her mental and emotional state disintegrated, her plans grew more bizarre and macabre, concerning her boyfriend Joe Cinque. In October she knocked Joe out with Rohypnol and then injected him with a lethal dose of heroin. Nobody tried to stop her.
This reads more like a very short synopsis than a logline. Way too many unnecessary details clutter the read. But most importantly, I still don't have a good idea of the story. Does the story end with the injection, or is that just the beginning of the journey? Whichever it is you're either tellingRead more
This reads more like a very short synopsis than a logline. Way too many unnecessary details clutter the read.
But most importantly, I still don’t have a good idea of the story. Does the story end with the injection, or is that just the beginning of the journey? Whichever it is you’re either telling us too much or too little.
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At 52 words your stretching the boundaries of a logline. I'd leave out the genre and the psychologist name. Plus you could reword it to convey the same information more concisely. The story is clear, I would be interested in watching. But it's still lacking a personal touch to really pull an audiencRead more
At 52 words your stretching the boundaries of a logline. I’d leave out the genre and the psychologist name. Plus you could reword it to convey the same information more concisely.
The story is clear, I would be interested in watching. But it’s still lacking a personal touch to really pull an audience in. Maybe a detail regarding the psychologist, or what’s at stake if he fails, are the ghosts on his side or against him?
– Judge, Paul.
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Based on a play isn't information usually found in a logline. Leave it for the poster. I find it a little too sparse. The Romeo and Juliet like love story is clear, but what makes this story different? What separates it from the countless other stories of its kind. Without that, there's simply not eRead more
Based on a play isn’t information usually found in a logline. Leave it for the poster.
I find it a little too sparse. The Romeo and Juliet like love story is clear, but what makes this story different? What separates it from the countless other stories of its kind. Without that, there’s simply not enough to catch my interest enough to read the script, or watch the movie.
– Judge, Paul.
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