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When a Newly recruited police officer discovers that his younger sister is a serial killer, he does everything to keep anyone from finding out.
Sorry forgot - Judge Paul Clarke.
Sorry forgot – Judge Paul Clarke.
See lessWhen a Newly recruited police officer discovers that his younger sister is a serial killer, he does everything to keep anyone from finding out.
This happens to be the major storyline for season seven of Dexter, just with the roles reversed. I think it makes for an interesting with some conflict. But I know nothing about the characters other than he's a new recruit and she's younger. Give the officer a trait, the obvious would be that he's iRead more
This happens to be the major storyline for season seven of Dexter, just with the roles reversed.
I think it makes for an interesting with some conflict. But I know nothing about the characters other than he’s a new recruit and she’s younger. Give the officer a trait, the obvious would be that he’s idealistic and believes in the law in black and white. Hence some internal conflict when it comes to saving his sister.
Also, there needs to be some direction. Something that will happen, some endpoint or goal. Otherwise the story has no direction. He’s just going to protect her? Then what?
See lessAfter falling for the woman who defrauded his company, a now bankrupt playboy hatches the perfect plan to win her heart: he'll bust her out of prison.
I like it. Simple, gets the point across. An original twist on the break-out genre. I'm assuming it's more of a comedy. I think this could make a good story. It has many desirable elements. There's the irony of having a playboy (I'm assuming he's a bit of a player) falling in love. And that she's thRead more
I like it. Simple, gets the point across. An original twist on the break-out genre. I’m assuming it’s more of a comedy. I think this could make a good story.
It has many desirable elements. There’s the irony of having a playboy (I’m assuming he’s a bit of a player) falling in love. And that she’s the very woman responsible for him being bankrupt. He has a clear goal, break her out. Obstacles, a prison is designed to keep people in. And stakes, he could end up in jail himself if he’s caught (a possible comedic ending?)
I think this logline is solid enough to start fleshing out the story.
Paul Clarke (Judge)
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