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So his injured penis can heal an alpha-male is put on libido removing medication, disrupting his win at all costs mentality and threatening his chances of becoming street luge champion.
Thanks holbrook. Good stuff. I think there would be two stories. There would be the attempting to win the championship, and a romantic one, where the lack of libido opens his eyes to the world. I do like your version of the logline. I guess I could use either, depending on who it was marketed to. UsRead more
Thanks holbrook. Good stuff. I think there would be two stories. There would be the attempting to win the championship, and a romantic one, where the lack of libido opens his eyes to the world.
I do like your version of the logline. I guess I could use either, depending on who it was marketed to. Using the word penis is a (albeit cheap) way to attract attention. Gives you a better idea that it is a bit of a light hearted comedy.
See lessWhen a prototype super-soldier goes rogue, he struggles to make his way home before the U.S. Army closes in and reclaims its property.
I think SOLDIER is the sci-fi version, but UNIVERSAL SOLDIER is possibly even more similar. As you said, not necessarily a bad thing. It was a good enough idea to get made once (or twice), it should be good enough to get made again. I think what they lacked, and what your logline lacks, is a personaRead more
I think SOLDIER is the sci-fi version, but UNIVERSAL SOLDIER is possibly even more similar. As you said, not necessarily a bad thing. It was a good enough idea to get made once (or twice), it should be good enough to get made again.
I think what they lacked, and what your logline lacks, is a personal touch. Give us some hint as to what type of man he is, why is he so hell bent on getting home, or what happens if he doesn’t. Maybe his family is in danger. Does he have his memory from a former life? We’ve seen the super soldier a million times, give us an emotional reason to care about him.
Note: Just realised, it’s also the same idea as DARK ANGEL. The James Cameron tv show staring Jessica Alba. That was a nice twist making the super soldier a young woman. It was a good premise, but the show went downhill from there.
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Sounds like a Welsh version of the Australian film BoyTown (2006). On one hand, an idea good enough to make into a movie. On the other, it wasn't a very good movie. If you could include the reason why wants to reunite them? Personal reasons, he needs money, he's living in the past, etc. I think thatRead more
Sounds like a Welsh version of the Australian film BoyTown (2006).
On one hand, an idea good enough to make into a movie. On the other, it wasn’t a very good movie.
If you could include the reason why wants to reunite them? Personal reasons, he needs money, he’s living in the past, etc. I think that would make it more intriguing, more personal.
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