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An emotionally stunted musician hits the road with an aspiring producer in order to track down the woman who has been the subject of all his work since she broke his heart in high school.
Along the lines of what has been said above, I might suggest something like "A broke, dried up musician hits the road in search of the high school sweetheart who inspired his success with a deadly loan shark hot on his tail." Perhaps not your story exactly but it includes the essential elements I thRead more
Along the lines of what has been said above, I might suggest something like “A broke, dried up musician hits the road in search of the high school sweetheart who inspired his success with a deadly loan shark hot on his tail.” Perhaps not your story exactly but it includes the essential elements I think of protagonist, goal, stakes, and antagonist. Nice idea. Good luck!!
See less-A group of international tourists are taken off the beaten path to an isolated village deep in the Vietnamese countryside where they experience a Viet Cong tunnel crawl that makes the famous Cu Chi tunnels seem like a playground… tighter, more claustrophobic, scarier. They get their money?s worth and then some!
Unfortunately this doesn't sound like a logline for a feature film. There is no hero, antagonist, struggle, goal, etc. It sounds like the description of an event on someone's holiday. At best it could be the lead-in to a segment on a travel documentary but even then it lacks a purpose. It is reallyRead more
Unfortunately this doesn’t sound like a logline for a feature film. There is no hero, antagonist, struggle, goal, etc. It sounds like the description of an event on someone’s holiday. At best it could be the lead-in to a segment on a travel documentary but even then it lacks a purpose. It is really just the ‘place’ element of a logline. It needs all the other ingredients. It could be a horror film set in the tunnels when the young couple on their holiday discover a secret passage that leads to a…. you get the idea.
See lessAfter a mild-mannered coroner awakens to find he?s become a zombie, not even a decaying body or a band of rogue survivors can deter thoughts of his unfaithful wife: he?s gonna kill that bitch.
Sounds fun! My stab at it- When a murdered coroner awakens to find himself a zombie revenge against his faithless wife is the only thing on his mind. Gab, in your version I'm not sure what 'rogue survivors' are survivors of? And the fact that he is a zombie makes 'decaying flesh' a given so I don'tRead more
Sounds fun!
My stab at it- When a murdered coroner awakens to find himself a zombie revenge against his faithless wife is the only thing on his mind.
Gab, in your version I’m not sure what ‘rogue survivors’ are survivors of? And the fact that he is a zombie makes ‘decaying flesh’ a given so I don’t think you need that description. The impediment to his success might be that he is the only zombie in town and has to remain incognito while trying to revenge his death…?
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