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A retired undefeated boxing champion William leads a simple life after losing all his money and a former boxing champion Michael insults him in a live press conference which leads the battle between their sons as they become rivals. The outcome of the battle leads Michael to challenge William to fight him in the ring and he accepts it.
It would help if you distinguish the protagonist from the antagonist. Protagonist: A former boxing champion Antagonist: A former boxing champion Or at least consolidate. "When their son's square off, two former boxing rival's.... Hope that helps.
It would help if you distinguish the protagonist from the antagonist.
Protagonist: A former boxing champion
Antagonist: A former boxing champion
Or
at least consolidate.
“When their son’s square off, two former boxing rival’s….
Hope that helps.
See lessIn order to save her abducted daughter, a desperate American expatriate must stop an inexorable Nigerian terrorist from launching a nuclear attack on Nigerian soil.
Since the motivation is to save the daughter, what she must do should directly relate. In your logline her daughter is abducted, then later it switches to, she must stop a nuclear attack; that's alright, but you need to add a connection so we understand how stopping the nuclear attack relates to getRead more
Since the motivation is to save the daughter, what she must do should directly relate. In your logline her daughter is abducted, then later it switches to, she must stop a nuclear attack; that’s alright, but you need to add a connection so we understand how stopping the nuclear attack relates to getting her daughter back.
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“When her daughter is kidnapped by Nigerian terrorists, a desperate American expatriate has 24 hours to discover their whereabouts before they strap a nuclear bomb on her child and destroy the city of Lagos.”
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Hope that helps, good luck with this.
See lessAn aging songwriter used to be wildly successful, but lost his fame when the inspiration for all his songs, his wife, left him. Now, he has been kidnapped by an aspiring singer, who is giving him 3 months to write a great album for the young singer to steal. Having been unable to write anything good for years, the aged star must try to make his ex-wife fall back in love with him, in order to regain his writing ability and save his life.
I ?have to agree with Tony, his example says the same thing but with a third of the word count.
I ?have to agree with Tony, his example says the same thing but with a third of the word count.
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