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During an apocalypse, a nine year old albino boy finds himself in an evaluation limbo with 393 people; one upper class and one lower class citizen from each country in the world, where they must conquer five world problems together in order to save the universe from destruction. ------ Richiev says:Read more
During an apocalypse, a nine year old albino boy finds himself in an evaluation limbo with 393 people; one upper class and one lower class citizen from each country in the world, where they must conquer five world problems together in order to save the universe from destruction.
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Richiev says:?Now the next thing I would add to the logline is who’s doing the evaluation; is it God? Is it a supreme alien race? Is it future mankind… However if this is a secret or a ‘big reveal’ at the end of the movie then of course ignore this advice.
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The first thing I would do is choose a lead character. 394 people is way too many lead characters.
The first thing I would do is choose a lead character. 394 people is way too many lead characters.
See lessDying single father on the run from his criminal past must come to grips with series of choices that led him to commit murder in order to procure a new suitable home for his young son with special needs.
It seems as though the main goal of the story is to find a good home for his son. I would concentrate on that goal for the purpose of your logline.I would drop the line, "on the run from his criminal past." way too vague. He should be on the run from a specific person. ----- "When he's diagnosed witRead more
It seems as though the main goal of the story is to find a good home for his son. I would concentrate on that goal for the purpose of your logline.
I would drop the line, “on the run from his criminal past.” way too vague. He should be on the run from a specific person.
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“When he’s diagnosed with cancer, a terminally ill convict escapes from prison, determined to secure his special needs son a good home before a ruthless marshal with a grudge catches him and locks him back up.”