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A pert casino waitress accidentally tripled in stature by a scientist achieves her dream of Vegas stardom and falls in love wuth him, but sacrifices her size to save him when he’s kidnapped by a mobster. .,
You might want to replace the word pert, with petite for clarity.
You might want to replace the word pert, with petite for clarity.
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Wouldn't her marriage falling apart do more to hurt her business, since she is a family councilor, than her drinking problem? That being said, this sounds like it has the potential to be a great story. A family councilor who struggles in her own personal life. Probably make a great TV series.
Wouldn’t her marriage falling apart do more to hurt her business, since she is a family councilor, than her drinking problem?
That being said, this sounds like it has the potential to be a great story. A family councilor who struggles in her own personal life. Probably make a great TV series.
See lessA lawsuit for his wife?s injury offers a homeless group leader a ticket out? until a member of his flock threatens to testify. Now he must resort to extreme measure to stop him.
I know say this a lot on this site,- but- you need a lead character and the lead character must want something. This is an interesting situation but to improve the logline you should focus on a lead character.Here would be an example of what I mean:----- "After he's fired and loses his apartment, aRead more
I know say this a lot on this site,- but- you need a lead character and the lead character must want something. This is an interesting situation but to improve the logline you should focus on a lead character.
Here would be an example of what I mean:
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“After he’s fired and loses his apartment, a department store Santa is determined to give his son a perfect Christmas, even though they are forced to move into an abandoned train station with a group of homeless families.”
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Hope that helps, good luck with this!
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