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  1. Posted: July 28, 2019In: Superhero

    When a Bible Schoolteacher is brutalized by two racist cops, he must kill or be killed.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on July 28, 2019 at 11:00 am

    "When his son and daughter are brutalized by two police officers during a routine stop, a former Marine turned preacher sets aside his vows in order to get revenge on the two law officers responsible."

    “When his son and daughter are brutalized by two police officers during a routine stop, a former Marine turned preacher sets aside his vows in order to get revenge on the two law officers responsible.”

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  2. Posted: July 28, 2019In: Superhero

    When a Bible Schoolteacher is brutalized by two racist cops, he must kill or be killed.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on July 28, 2019 at 10:57 am

    It's not clear in the logline if the? lead character must "Kill or be killed" while the cops are beating him... in self-defenseOr if the lead character must "Kill or be killed" after the fact... in revenge.? (Like in the movie Death Wish)If it's the first case then this is just a situation.If it' thRead more

    It’s not clear in the logline if the? lead character must “Kill or be killed” while the cops are beating him… in self-defense

    Or if the lead character must “Kill or be killed” after the fact… in revenge.? (Like in the movie Death Wish)

    If it’s the first case then this is just a situation.

    If it’ the second case then you should have someone he cares about brutalized

    As a Christian he will believe in forgiveness, If someone strikes you, you are to turn the other cheek.

    However that Christian belief is not as easy to follow if it’s someone you care about who’s brutalized.

    That being said, if this is an evolution of the logline you had previously posted, it is getting better.

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  3. Posted: July 18, 2019In: Romance

    After an outsider college clique finds that a young magic poet can write love poems that make every woman fall in love with them, they kidnap the guy, only to find out that real love has to be mutual.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on July 19, 2019 at 12:31 pm

    "When the woman he connects with on social media shows up unannounced, a shy but good-hearted romantic must find a way to win her heart when she mistakenly believes his good looking roommate (Whose picture he used) is the man she fell in love with."Title: Love me Tinder(Or reverse it so the lead isRead more

    “When the woman he connects with on social media shows up unannounced, a shy but good-hearted romantic must find a way to win her heart when she mistakenly believes his good looking roommate (Whose picture he used) is the man she fell in love with.”

    Title: Love me Tinder

    (Or reverse it so the lead is a shy woman who has a good looking roommate if you would prefer a female protagonist)

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