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When all their attempts to achieve happiness fail, even when fulfilling family expectations, a highly disciplined hetero cis woman must deconstruct and find out what she wants in all aspects of her life even if that includes rediscovering her sexuality to be happy.
There are lots of great things you can do with with a lead character trying to find themselves.However, you are missing the 'moment' of clarity when she realizes she needs to change.For instance, when the lead character of "American Beauty" is fired, that is when he changes and begins to speak his mRead more
There are lots of great things you can do with with a lead character trying to find themselves.
However, you are missing the ‘moment’ of clarity when she realizes she needs to change.
For instance, when the lead character of “American Beauty” is fired, that is when he changes and begins to speak his mind to everyone.
Adding this moment to your logline will give it a little more focus and as a result, help draw your reader in.
(Granted, this moment of clarity won’t exactly be the reason, but simply the last straw but in a story like this I would definitely have that moment in the logline)
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Who is the lead character? What is their goal? What is standing in their way?
Who is the lead character?
What is their goal?
What is standing in their way?
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A logline is very specific. It is a very short description of the plot. Inciting incident, a lead character, goal, and conflict. What you have written is more of a blurb... "In space, no one can hear you scream" Two completely different things. A blurb is used to tease an audience into watching yourRead more
A logline is very specific. It is a very short description of the plot. Inciting incident, a lead character, goal, and conflict.
What you have written is more of a blurb… “In space, no one can hear you scream”
Two completely different things.
A blurb is used to tease an audience into watching your movie. (After the movie is made and about to come to theaters)
A logline is used to sell your script. (Before your script has even been seen by a studio)
However, I would definitely keep some of this in the logline.
When (This thing happens to the lead character) a wallflower is forced to come off the wall if she’s too (Accomplish this goal)
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