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After an outsider college clique finds that a young magic poet can write love poems that make every woman fall in love with them, they kidnap the guy, only to find out that real love has to be mutual.
One more thing, if you want to go the 'other' direction with this movie. Then you should use the word, 'attraction' and not 'love'In other words, the poet can make it so the opposite sex is 'attracted' to you. They will fawn over every word, even sleep with you.But he can't make them fall in love wiRead more
One more thing, if you want to go the ‘other’ direction with this movie. Then you should use the word, ‘attraction’ and not ‘love’
In other words, the poet can make it so the opposite sex is ‘attracted’ to you. They will fawn over every word, even sleep with you.
But he can’t make them fall in love with you.
So, you can have all meaningless sex you want, but you can’t have true love.
True love needs free will.
In this scenario. The lead would think all he wants is every girl he meets to want him, but what he finds he really needs is true love.
However, this scenario has a very big problem. Because the lead character is basically giving the girls a magical rufie, and the story would have serious “Me Too’ issues.
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See lessAfter an outsider college clique finds that a young magic poet can write love poems that make every woman fall in love with them, they kidnap the guy, only to find out that real love has to be mutual.
You need a lead character, And the lead character needs to be in head over heels in love. That love should mean the entire world to the lead character And also, for this logline/story to work, the audience needs to feel that love. It has to come across Then the audience will sort of understand why tRead more
You need a lead character, And the lead character needs to be in head over heels in love. That love should mean the entire world to the lead character
And also, for this logline/story to work, the audience needs to feel that love. It has to come across
Then the audience will sort of understand why the lead character who is love-struck might kidnap the poet.
Because there is a real-world consequence for kidnapping.? You have to make it believable that someone is so in love they risk years in prison just to win the love of their life.
Also, don’t tell us the ending in the logline.
See lessWhen all their attempts to achieve happiness fail, even when fulfilling family expectations, a highly disciplined hetero cis woman must deconstruct and find out what she wants in all aspects of her life even if that includes rediscovering her sexuality to be happy.
Lol, in response to DPG?s idea about a 30-year-old woman who has never had an orgasm. There could be some very funny bits you could infuse into your story. Comedic bits: She buys an old motorcycle and goes over a bunch of speed bumps. She askes if she could use her friend?s dryer, loads a bunch of sRead more
Lol, in response to DPG?s idea about a 30-year-old woman who has never had an orgasm. There could be some very funny bits you could infuse into your story.
Comedic bits:
She buys an old motorcycle and goes over a bunch of speed bumps.
She askes if she could use her friend?s dryer, loads a bunch of shoes and sits on top of it.
She tries horseback riding.
She goes to a very straight-laced hypnotist who normally helps people quit smoking and explains she wants him to help her have an orgasm.
She self-consciously tries to read, ?How to have an orgasm? while riding the subway, gets weird looks, then an eighty-year-old lady nods and gives her a thumbs up.
The basic idea is she looks up on-line all the things woman claim have given them an orgasm and tries them out? probably in the form of a montage. (Set to ?I touch myself? or some song along those lines depending on the rights)
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