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Destiny brings a lonely sketch artist and a bohemian girl together. Despite fate granting them one night, they are forever bound by a magical origami legend.
On a side note.In a love story, you have the "Attraction" and the "Romance". The "Attraction" is what makes the audience want to see the two leads get together. The "Romance" is what keeps the two apart.The stronger the "Romance" (What keeps them apart) The stronger the audience will want to see theRead more
On a side note.
In a love story, you have the “Attraction” and the “Romance”. The “Attraction” is what makes the audience want to see the two leads get together. The “Romance” is what keeps the two apart.
The stronger the “Romance” (What keeps them apart) The stronger the audience will want to see the two leads get together.? (And the more gripping the story will be)
The two leads are in love (as an example) but their families are bitter rivals. The obstacle is so powerful the starstruck couple commit suicide. This makes for strong romance.
The stronger the obstacle that keeps them apart, the stronger the “Romance”?
In your logline, you hint that the two only share one night together but don’t tell us what keeps them apart. If they liked each other so much, why not just stay together? What is the “Romance” of your story? What is the nearly insurmountable obstacle that keeps the two from being together forever?
See lessDestiny brings a lonely sketch artist and a bohemian girl together. Despite fate granting them one night, they are forever bound by a magical origami legend.
Is the story about the 'one night'? Or does the 'one night,' set the story in motion?
Is the story about the ‘one night’?
See lessOr does the ‘one night,’ set the story in motion?
A crazy caveman from a forest tribe accidentally ends up in 18th century London, he must find a way to get back home before he becomes an exhibit at the museum of history.
I am normally not concerned with the 'how' because I figure it will be explained in the story. (And that might be the case with this story as well) However, 'how' in the world does someone accidentally time travel?
I am normally not concerned with the ‘how’ because I figure it will be explained in the story. (And that might be the case with this story as well)
See lessHowever, ‘how’ in the world does someone accidentally time travel?