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  1. Posted: April 10, 2019In: Comedy

    In an anthropomorphic animal world, a Wild Macaque from a Primitive tribe tries to fit into an 18th century aristocratic society in order to rescue her father from a Wealthy Psychotic Rabbit.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 11, 2019 at 5:25 am

    What did the Wealthy Psychotic Rabbit do? Did he kidnap the father?

    What did the Wealthy Psychotic Rabbit do? Did he kidnap the father?

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  2. Posted: April 6, 2019In: Family

    When 3 fatherless girls discover that their favorite pop-star is performing at their school?s father-daughter-only dance, they set out on a crazy mission to find 3 stand-in dads.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 7, 2019 at 4:21 pm

    On a completely different note. This is just about story and not a logline thing.In one of the girl's quest to find a surrogate dad for the dance, should actually find her real father.But the real dad isn't the man she has built up in her head.This makes her realize how must her mom means to her.SoRead more

    On a completely different note. This is just about story and not a logline thing.

    In one of the girl’s quest to find a surrogate dad for the dance, should actually find her real father.
    But the real dad isn’t the man she has built up in her head.

    This makes her realize how must her mom means to her.
    So she says ‘screw it’ and takes her mom to the father-daughter dance.

    When the pesky ticket collecter at the dance points out, she can’t come in because she isn’t the dad.
    The girl replies, “She’s my mom, my dad, and my best friends” and pushes right past the snotty ticket collector into the dance.

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  3. Posted: April 6, 2019In: Family

    When 3 fatherless girls discover that their favorite pop-star is performing at their school?s father-daughter-only dance, they set out on a crazy mission to find 3 stand-in dads.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 7, 2019 at 4:14 pm

    I agree with dpg's feedback.Also, I get the story from the logline. This is very good. Because some of the loglines I will read and I still have no Idea what the story is about.But your logline is clear and to the point.--------------------------------------------

    I agree with dpg’s feedback.

    Also, I get the story from the logline. This is very good. Because some of the loglines I will read and I still have no Idea what the story is about.
    But your logline is clear and to the point.
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