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After her big crush reveals himself as a werewolf, a vampire girl must find a way around her orthodox family to get together
"When she falls in love with a werewolf, and orthodox vampire must convince her traditional family to accept him."
“When she falls in love with a werewolf, and orthodox vampire must convince her traditional family to accept him.”
See lessA self-centered, up-and-coming actor is about to have his once-in-a-lifetime ?big break? meeting with a control-freak star-director but his neurotic casual-girlfriend reveals that she?s pregnant, unplanned, certain he?s the father, potentially bringing everything he?s worked for crashing down, causing him to morally juggle his priorities.
The trouble I am seeing with this logline (Besides the length) is that there are actors who are fathers. The inciting incident is that the lead character unexpectedly discovers he will be a father, but that in-and-of-itself won't in any way hamper his career as an actor. (Beyond how it might hamperRead more
The trouble I am seeing with this logline (Besides the length) is that there are actors who are fathers. The inciting incident is that the lead character unexpectedly discovers he will be a father, but that in-and-of-itself won’t in any way hamper his career as an actor. (Beyond how it might hamper any career)
That doesn’t mean you can’t have this as a plot, It just means you have to show us in the logline how in this specific case becoming a father will hamper his career. Why is it, in this specific case it will be a detriment to the lead character’s career when in all other cases it is not?
See lessAfter his colony laughs on his claims of rising sea level, Mr. Penguin sets out with his family to reach “high grounds” before the ice melts
Being laughed at ultimately isn't what makes him seek higher ground but instead, it is discovering sea levels are rising.?The inciting incident should be how he learns the sea level is rising.
Being laughed at ultimately isn’t what makes him seek higher ground but instead, it is discovering sea levels are rising.?The inciting incident should be how he learns the sea level is rising.
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