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  1. Posted: April 7, 2018In: Fantasy

    A sleepaholic student from Los Angeles is determined to find the girl in his dreams, eventually leading him to a spiritual world called soul space, an intermediate dimension which exists between heaven and hell

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 7, 2018 at 4:07 am

    You might try adding some immediacy. ------------------------------------------------ "When the reoccurring?girl he dreams about cries out for help, a sleepaholic student, determined that she is not just a figment of his imagination, sets down the dark path to rescue the girl of his dreams."

    You might try adding some immediacy.
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    “When the reoccurring?girl he dreams about cries out for help, a sleepaholic student, determined that she is not just a figment of his imagination, sets down the dark path to rescue the girl of his dreams.”

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  2. Posted: March 30, 2018In: Comedy

    After learning about their spouse’s college fling, two unhappily married lovers plot their reunion only to encounter hopeless loyalty

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    Added an answer on March 30, 2018 at 4:20 am

    "In order to get out of their unhappy marriages, two lovers attempt to make their spouses fall in love with each other"

    “In order to get out of their unhappy marriages, two lovers attempt to make their spouses fall in love with each other”

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  3. Posted: March 30, 2018In: Comedy

    After learning about their spouse’s college fling, two unhappily married lovers plot their reunion only to encounter hopeless loyalty

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    Added an answer on March 30, 2018 at 2:46 am

    I don't understand how you can encounter hopeless loyalty, How is that shown on screen? ------------------------------------------------------ "When he discovers his wife and best friend had an affair in college, a distraught?husband plots to reciprocate by having?an affair with his best friends wifRead more

    I don’t understand how you can encounter hopeless loyalty, How is that shown on screen?
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    “When he discovers his wife and best friend had an affair in college, a distraught?husband plots to reciprocate by having?an affair with his best friends wife to get even.”

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