1. Posted: November 12, 2017In:

    (short script) When a pair of bumbling friends encounter a moody Princess, one of them makes sure that she is given a lesson in humility.

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    You should have the princess do something mean or snobby to the lead characters so we can relate to? their goal of teaching her a lesson in humility, Otherwise the lead characters are the ones who will come across as mean and unlikable.

    You should have the princess do something mean or snobby to the lead characters so we can relate to? their goal of teaching her a lesson in humility,
    Otherwise the lead characters are the ones who will come across as mean and unlikable.

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  2. Posted: November 9, 2017In:

    When an alien hunts a woman, she must stop the alien and save the ones captured by him.

    Richiev Singularity

    A few specifics would help us visualize the story. Here would be an example of adding a few specifics. ------------------------------------- "When a struggling professional wrestler is hunted by a flesh eating Alien, she must use her body slamming skills to defeat the alien and release the townsfolkRead more

    A few specifics would help us visualize the story. Here would be an example of adding a few specifics.
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    “When a struggling professional wrestler is hunted by a flesh eating Alien, she must use her body slamming skills to defeat the alien and release the townsfolk held captive by the creature.”

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  3. Posted: November 8, 2017In:

    When a genie in a pill bottle grants him his wish to be an action hero, a meek civil servant suffering from high anxiety must survive his mundane day job that magically transformed into a series of spectacular action sequences.

    Richiev Singularity

    lol, what if it turns out it was just the pills all along, there was no genie...

    lol, what if it turns out it was just the pills all along, there was no genie…

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