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  1. Posted: February 18, 2017In: Drama

    When a young ward of the state is fostered to a crazy family planning a heist, he sets out to find his real father before being forced to engage in criminal activities that will see him back in juvenile prison.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 18, 2017 at 6:52 pm

    "When he is fostered to a crazy family planning a heist. a young ward of the state must find his real father or be forced to engage in criminal activities that will send him back to juvenile detention."

    “When he is fostered to a crazy family planning a heist. a young ward of the state must find his real father or be forced to engage in criminal activities that will send him back to juvenile detention.”

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  2. Posted: February 17, 2017In: Drama

    Please! Review it! Thanks.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 17, 2017 at 8:44 am

    I agree with Nir. he has a good logline example.

    I agree with Nir. he has a good logline example.

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  3. Posted: February 14, 2017In: Drama

    Two friend’s relationship turns hostile after one of them reveals their love for the other.

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    Added an answer on February 14, 2017 at 11:01 am

    If this is a story about two guys who are friends and one declares his love; but the other is straight, it should be made clear in the logline because that is the hook. If this is a story about a boy and a girl who are friends and one declares his or her love, then the logline needs a hook, it needsRead more

    If this is a story about two guys who are friends and one declares his love; but the other is straight, it should be made clear in the logline because that is the hook.

    If this is a story about a boy and a girl who are friends and one declares his or her love, then the logline needs a hook, it needs that one extra thing to reel the reader in.

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