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  1. Posted: February 10, 2017In: Fantasy

    In the year 3000 from the hell-break a homeless ex-soldier takes up an escort mission and receives as payment powerful weapon, with which he’ll battle against the Empire chasing them and deliver his clients to safety.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 11, 2017 at 11:14 am

    I am going to attempt to write a logline based on several of these logline attempts: ---------------------------------------------------------- "After dimensional boundaries fail, a sentient ferret hires a gruff mercenary to ?escort her family across the wasteland to safety, but are perused by an anRead more

    I am going to attempt to write a logline based on several of these logline attempts:
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    “After dimensional boundaries fail, a sentient ferret hires a gruff mercenary to ?escort her family across the wasteland to safety, but are perused by an ancient evil who wants a powerful artifact they have in their possession.”

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  2. Posted: February 10, 2017In: Fantasy

    In the year 3,000 since the hell-break an ex-soldier is helping group of small weasel-like creatures to cross hostile continent in search for their homeland. Part of the payment he receives is not simply a toy like he believes in the beginning but a mysterious powerful entity.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 10, 2017 at 6:36 pm

    Your character should have a goal. In your logline it is the creatures he is helping who have the goal which would make them the lead character. What does the lead character want. Why must he help the weasels?

    Your character should have a goal. In your logline it is the creatures he is helping who have the goal which would make them the lead character.

    What does the lead character want. Why must he help the weasels?

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  3. Posted: February 2, 2017In: SciFi

    When a DiD sufferer takes an experimental drug for his condition, his alternate personality, who perceives reality differently, begins to takeover and goes on a quest to free humanity from hidden beings controlling reality while his alternate persona believes he’s actually on a murderous rampage.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 3, 2017 at 9:48 am

    Here is an attempt: ----- "After he's treated with an experimental drug for his DiD, a man will multiple personalities begins killing sinister?beings he discovers are secretly controlling the universe, but must fight his alternative personality who claims he is killing innocent people."

    Here is an attempt:
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    “After he’s treated with an experimental drug for his DiD, a man will multiple personalities begins killing sinister?beings he discovers are secretly controlling the universe, but must fight his alternative personality who claims he is killing innocent people.”

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